Tempest ~ awarded by Lily
O silent star that swarms the sky leant to one side, debating why, the breath of day pass over she? to sail upon an emerald sea; The stains of salt that streak her mast dulled from the sun and fading...
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Beautiful writing Sammie, such awesome flow to these verse. Lovely spill of words my friend!! Enjoyed this read!! I dont think I could write like this, but I am so glad you can. Hugs! Bobby
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wonderful read - both form and content. a pleasure Samantha.
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(((~Sammie~))) Exhale me on a quietening shore, for I shall sail, no more: no more. Wonderful write....
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Thank you all for your time, and such kind comments, (((((Deb))))) how wonderful to see you here! Sammie
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Sammie, Your poetry has voice and reason. More than that it has essence and then more essence. I enjoyed the meter and rhyme here too. Such a wonderful mix of the dark and light in the waves and tides...
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Samantha, Your rhyme and meter are such a joy to read. This is such a nice change and we just don't read rhyme that much these days. I love the chiffon. That is nice.
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This is truly beautiful in imagery and verse, Samantha. Excellent poetry! xoxo Wilopent
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I am truly feeling this Sammie... truly tugged at my heart... love it much my friend. (Huggs)
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Exhale me on a quietening shore, for I shall sail, no more: no more. Wow Sammie ... this is truly awesome in so many ways. I especially love that ending .... wonderful!! *clapping*
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............it was late in the night and he tried to sleep some to no avail. He ambled over to the fridge and pour himself a generous plastic cup (must get proper glasses) of iced tea. He drank, it...
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Oh Wow!!! Now this Is SENSATIONAL!!!! I was captured from the first line... You write with a Golden Pen, Diamond Tipped with Magickal Ink Totally STUNNING!! Throughout..I ADORED This!!!
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thank you all for such dear replies and some that make smiles appreciate you all, thanks so very very much Sammie
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this, to me, is up there among the scribes of the classic poets... I sat on the sand and watched it all, and there you were, exhaled onto the shore.. such beautiful passion Sammie.. i am speechless...
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~ I'm so stoked to see this one awarded... Congratulations on this wonderful, and most deserved award, dear Sammie I loved reading this again....your style and poesy is a blessing to us all *warm wing...
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Jeez this is marvelous Sammie O wretched day! That greets the morrow would thee lend me a dream to borrow? To steer my eye on swells of foam & drift me on the route to home; Evoke bold shield of...
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http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g97/sinfulone_2006/congrats.gif Oh I can sense the Ocean Queen! my soundless calling she hath seen, her sweeping arms encircle me I launch myself into her sea!...
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Hello Sammie Oh wow, feeling the woe, and the sorrow in this tempest, the salt sting biting beyond the soul. Simply sublime in it's rhyme and emotional swall. A big congratulations on the award. Hugs....
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wow, thank you so much Lily, and all for your encouraging replies to this piece awww, I gone all mushy now hugeeeeeeeeeeeeee thanks!
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Sam This is very deserving of the award. Write on my friend! Paul
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